Went into it and I am lovin' it! Gimme more!
I'd agree with one of the YT comments (which probably is from one of the yaktribe locals anyways): In the beginning the music is a fair bit too loud while the servoskull is talking, making it difficult to understand.
BUT: The music itself and how it's integrated is very nicely done, keep it. Just a bit more quiet while Mr. Skelly is talking.
Love the establishing shots with the Gangs in the beginning, too. (Camera shots, not bullet shots!

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Offering a "birds eye" view after deployment (or as top down as the lenght of your arms allows) would be cool to also establish the battlefield, maybe marking up the mission targets, deployments etc. would be cool.
Edith says:
Narrating the post game sequence would be nice. Sometimes I'll have battlereports running while painting, so having the audio summary would be helpful.