Inquisimunda N17 draft - Typos report, Fluff, Pics

alphonse

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Hi everyone,
in order to improve the Inquisimunda N17 Edition Draft (available here), and to keep the other threads as clear as possible, please use this one only:

1. to report spelling mistakes and typos, suggest rewording of misleading phrases, or add explanations to an evasive paragraph.

2. to suggest 2-3 lines of fluff or an appropriate illustration (ideally hi-res, in .png for borderless pic).​

To keep things simple, please precise the corresponding page number, and possibly the paragraph's title.
To notify you I have taken into account your contribution into the next version of the draft, I will like your post.

This is a community endeavor. Every contribution, no matter how small, is a tangible step toward a better outcome. Many thanks!
 
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Huggsnok1

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Latest edition, increased TG for the gangs to 1500. Noble House delegation under Diplomatic delegations (Variants) needs to be changed to follow the aforementioned increase of TG.

//Huggsnok1
 
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Huggsnok1

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A question really, but here goes... The Ecclesiarchy warband (page14) says that Sororitas can have Power armor. Should there be a clarification that they can have a +3 armor for 160 TG(as stated on page 47)?
 
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alphonse

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@Huggsnok1 Thank you very much to point it. It should say "may purchase Power armours (3+ armour) as common items".

Indeed, we haven't yet do the revision of the warbands section. It is possible a lot of stuff should be reworded since we have just finished the new Expanded Armoury and Bizarre Bazaar.

Thank you for your thoughtful re-reading (y)(y)(y)
 
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alphonse

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@Huggsnok1 Thank you very very much! FYI, the Warbands chapter will soon be reworked. So, maybe you would prefer to focus on other parts for now to avoid being disappointed if we completely change this chapter after your proofreading.
 

Huggsnok1

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How is the Cosntructs going? Can I help with that? I have som ideas. I'll draft something up and see if it is good.
 
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alphonse

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@Huggsnok1 There is a start of discussion about this in the rules addendum thread if you are interested :)

I think option 3 will work well, with little tweak. We could make them work like bought upgrade to race.


Combat servitorCost: +30
MWSBSSTWIALdClWilInt
-1---+1--1--1+2+1-2
Choose one of the programs upon creation:
1: Close combat: +1 Ws + 1 I
2: Ranged: +1BS​
All weapons have to be implanted.
Wargear: Lobochip, +Maybe some other cybernetic implants, that can boost their stats if bought?
Talents: Some kind of feel no pain rule?
 

ClanBuckCANS

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2. to suggest 2-3 lines of fluff or an appropriate illustration (ideally hi-res, in .png for borderless pic).​

Alrighty I've been off I the hazes of de real world, fer à spell. But was coming back regarding me unit from the 105th regiment, and the hubabalu they got dem selves into with the Inquisition forces. . Including the resection of a few long since dead good and bad things. . . .:D
 

Elmoi

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Hello !
First of all: thank you for this GREAT work !!! I'm an absolute fan ! Love inquisimunda !
Can you tell us when you will make news for N17 ? Like rules of bands and psy power (and all of missing things :p)

Thanks so much again.
 

ClanBuckCANS

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Been a spell out of all things weird thanks to a custom time with the true fallen dark angel Cypher. But alas of me time with him the rum ran dry, and apparently those marine types can't hold the grot too well. Bah. Here be a submission for yer fluff for
INQUISIMUNDA

Ten years.

It didn't seem like that long ago to Sergeant Major Eva D’vidsin. The memory of being deployed on Armageddon, as a grunt was still fresh in her nightmares. Watching helplessly as the poorly trained, and completely unprepared newbies faced the oncoming mass of frenzied orks. Even though ten years had past, she could still feel her stomach churn at the order she remember being told to give.

“Forget your troops Eva!” The general screamed at her, “get the command group to the hive tubes!”

Her unit did as ordered. The screaming of the children of the elite houses of Necromunda never entering her squadrons decision making abilities. The command group got to the tube lift, as ordered. When Eva turned to go try and save as many as she could, her commander gripped her shoulder.

“ They're gone Eva.” He said with a a soulless voice “there is no one to save. Now get in the tube, we have a war to win.”

Ten years later, and she can still taste the burning flesh of what remained of her commanders head. There wasn't one thing from the three years of her 'tour’ of the third Armageddon war that made her regret covering her face with his blood. She saved enough members of the Necromundan 105th regiment, that lord Helmwar himself, spoke at her court-martial. The 125, guards-men and women whom she saved followed her without question for three years, playing guerilla warfare like only Necromundans could. Receiving battle commendations, and blessings from the Adapta Sorites after the Drop site ambush. She even had the respect of some Orks, after the hordes of chaos showed up. Nope he had gotten what he deserved.

She didn't even remember his name.

It had been ten years since she left Necromunda, as the PDF’s tithe for the third war of Armageddon. Six years and two months since coming home, forced retirement from the imperial guard, due to being too effective, and knowing too much. Yet she remembered the gratifying feeling of his blood running down her face like it had just happened.

Retirement, never was her cup of tea. The savage Orks, and more so the Hounds of Chaos, haunted her sleep. Then again, once in the guard, always in the guard. Everyone from the squabbling houses, to Lord Helmwar himself, asked for her assistance That's how she met Agnes, and how she got entangled with the Inquisition. If the last six years was retirement, death wasn't going to the break she was hoping for.

She learned early on you had to be careful with the Inquisition. After the incident between a rogue Ordo Xeno and a Puritan Ordo Malleus, which nearly ended in an 'extriminaus’ order for all of the Cursed Peaks hive, she was weary of coming under the baleful eyes of the Inquisition again. Yet like the guard, once in their gaze, always in their gaze. The hardest part is when the Inquisition showed up, looking for you, it never ended well.

Eva had almost killed the ordo heretic who even suggested, more genetic testing to ensure Grace wasn't a mutation. As if the Inquisition purity seals, documents, and sealed test results were not enough. Yet still the Inquisitor tried. When Grace saved him from the angry mob of actual mutants, by only turning on her pet Dragon. It's thrice blessed and fearsome form known to instill fear, even in agents of the Inquisition. The purity seals from by the Adeptus Mechanicus, the Ecclesiarchy, and the Inquisition itself, proving the worth of the woman. The Inquisitor left them alone then.

She thought she was done. Then today, she got a letter of all things, from the last creature she ever wanted to admit that she knew. The Ordo Xenos hidden project that got the 105th off Armageddon. The Great White Ork, Freelancer, La Faucheuse Blanche. So once again into the employ of the Inquisition the remains of the 105th went. My the Emperor have mercy on those who crossed her path.
 
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