@Arbitrator81
As you're asking for feedback in your videos, I dare to bring some more here. I hope that's ok.

I am currently in the middle of Season 2, still having a blast.
The very good and informative narration is done mostly in future tense.
Something like
"Dipstick is going to move over there to get some cover and will then shoot his autopistol. The shot is going to *dice roll* hit, the roll to wound *dice roll* will fail."
Maybe that's just me not being a native speaker, but I am wondering if present tense wouldn't feel more action-packed, with the added benefit of saving you some breath.

Because usually we get shown the gangers actions in "real time" in parallel to the narration.
"Dipstick moves over here, taking some cover and shoots his autopistol. The shot *dice roll* hits, tries to wound *dice roll*, but fails to do that."
P.S.: This is really a minor thing I personally am wondering. And maybe it's not even a thing, but just some non-native speaker not knowing the habits of narration.